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Task : Find one poetry with a figurative language inside


Phenomenal Woman


By Maya Angelou 

Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.

I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size

But when I start to tell them,

They think I'm telling lies.

I say,

It's in the reach of my arms

The span of my hips,

The stride of my step,

The curl of my lips.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.


I walk into a room

Just as cool as you please,

And to a man,

The fellows stand or

Fall down on their knees.

Then they swarm around me,

A hive of honey bees.

I say,

It's the fire in my eyes,

And the flash of my teeth,

The swing in my waist,

And the joy in my feet.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.


Men themselves have wondered

What they see in me.

They try so much

But they can't touch

My inner mystery.

When I try to show them

They say they still can't see.

I say,

It's in the arch of my back,

The sun of my smile,

The ride of my breasts,

The grace of my style.

I'm a woman


Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.


Now you understand

Just why my head's not bowed.

I don't shout or jump about

Or have to talk real loud.

When you see me passing

It ought to make you proud.

I say,

It's in the click of my heels,

The bend of my hair,

the palm of my hand,

The need of my care,

'Cause I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.











Techniques this poem uses:

  •  This poem emphasizes being a phenomenal woman by repeating sentences at the conclusion of each verse. Also, this offers the poetry structure, facilitating the flow and coherence of the thoughts.

I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.

  • This poem uses a metaphor to compare men to a hive of bees. Metaphors compare two objects without using the words "like" or "as."
    Then they swarm around me,
    A hive of honey bees.

Phenomenally.

I'm a phenomenal woman.

  • In this poetry, men are compared to a hive of bees using a metaphor. When comparing two things, metaphors exclude the terms "like" or "as."

  • Then a hive of honey bees swarms around me.




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